![]() ![]() Serena has no agency, just instructions. nearly all information in the book is delivered through dialogue. The writing is very “Tell not show”, so rather Serena narrating her observations or using action to relay information. The author tries to counter act this by saying phrases like “he was giving me a choice.” but it’s apparent that there is only one option they are giving her. Serena let’s others make her decisions and choices. ![]() Here are the parts that irritate most: -Serenas interaction with every male protagonist are all based on them wanting her on some level and protecting her. It happens slowly, but by the time she gets to the place where she meets the other main characters the book got so much worse. As soon as the Fae enter the story Serena loses everything that strengthened her character. She shows promise and quiet strength and a backbone during a plot hatched by two evil villagers. Serena starts out her tale put in a rough spot that gets rougher throughout the first hour of the book. I’ll try to be as non spoiler as possible. However I felt compelled by how much this book really didn’t sit will with me. ![]() ![]() I don’t normally leave negative reviews.because I believe we all have our own tastes. ![]()
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